Development

I feel like this piece wasn't very successful, because it has a poor composition and some of the materials hadn't worked together the way I liked. To improve, I would not use chalk with coffee or perhaps use them away from each other in the piece. To do this, I would make the scale of which I work larger. This relates to my work I did several lessons ago where I incorporated coffee into my work to add tone and colour to the composition. I enjoy using coffee because it adds more tone to the piece. I will also use it to indicate rust. This relates to my artist Debbie Smyth, who uses thread in her piece. I also used scratching from artist Zachary Brown, for the jagged effect.

The word I wanted to convey were jagged.

Here I used a mark-making technique of drawing without looking at the paper which we learned during the first half term. I find the composition to be more effective than the last, having a more abstract effect. However I could improve by adding more colour to the piece. I have related this to my artist Guy Denning, due to the rough, controlled lines in the piece and I used Debbie Smyth for the use of thread. I feel using thread is a good way to develop my work because it is controlled and gives a 3D effect, bringing texture into the piece.  I feel like I didn't do this piece as well as I could have, because I was just experimenting with materials and had no idea what some would give a good effect. However, because of this I feel like I can add coffee and use a new technique of covering paper with masking tape to improve my work.

Here I further experimented with the use of masking tape to see what kinds of effects on backgrounds it would create. I feel the effect it gives is interesting, but I feel I could improve by adding mixed media into this piece so it isn't flat. To do this, I could add thread or any different surfaces. I can relate my work to my first experiments where I had first tried masking tape techniques, they connect because I have both made them seem like they are broken. I intend to add this broken effect into my piece by using masking tape. I can relate the work to Guy Denning, who uses rough textures of paint which I did in this piece. However, my lines aren't as free as his. I feel this rough texture is relevant to the piece I am creating and I intend to look more into it. It has helped me lead into a direction of which involves focusing on a broken effect. I am proud of this piece because it has helped me get ideas and be inspired for ways I can achieve an effective final piece.

Here I focused on the broken effect previously explained. I feel like it has been a success as the ripping of paper and attaching it with thread has given an effective representation of the meaning 'broken'. I could improve by adding more surfaces or layering onto several pieces of paper in order to create a 3D hole effect which could be interesting and relevant to my piece. This work is different to most of my artists, as I did this purely to test out new techniques, which helped me gain ideas I wouldn't have thought of otherwise.However, the loose lines could be similar to my artist Guy Denning's work. This piece has made me pursue the masking tape and ripping effect in my work, which I will continue to work on until I find the perfect composition. I think this work surprised me, as I didn't think I would get the eye-catching and unique effect from this as I did.

Here I have experimented more into my piece with the broken effect included. I used greyscale, however I feel the lack of colour makes it lose its eye-catching effect so in order to improve this I will add more colours with pastel or coffee to add more composition to the piece. I incorporated Guy Denning into my piece, involving the loose lines and controlled techniques to create a rough, textured and controlled effect into my work. I feel like this piece, with a bit of colour, could be a good start to creating a section of my final outcome. Because of this, I have a good feeling about this composition and I wish to pursue this as an idea.

I had used college into this piece by ripping the paper and rearranging it into a broken order. I used the rough lines of Guy Denning to create this piece. I used brown pastel to convey rust into this piece for the screw which relates to my research. I feel the composition isn't as creative as it could be, and I can improve on this. Therefore I am not very happy with this piece and feel a lot of improvements can be made. This has helped me know what works and what doesn't.

I did more ripping and sticking of the paper to remove the boring brown paper and used brown and black chalk to create an image of a screw. This work resembles Guy Denning with the rough lines created with the screw and I tried to add cracks into my work to relate it to my work. I would improve this by adding more composition by using different mediums. Because it seems like there isn't much going on in this piece. I am not happy with the piece because it seems too dull, so for my final piece I will not add any of this into it because I feel it doesn't work.

I used masking tape, coffee, ink and graphite here for the background, and added a bit of collage for the 3D effect and texture in my work. I added the dripping effect in my work to resemble something melting and fading away into the dark. This work had elements of Guy Denning in this with the rough lines in the background that faintly resembles a screw. I would improve this by adding more contrast into my work by maybe adding darker mediums or blending different tones into this piece. I am not happy with this because it isn't very eye-catching nor does it stand out. So with my final piece I will add more contrast.

For this piece I focused more on collage as the primary part of this piece. I feel adding collage onto a dull piece gives it more contrast and more of an interesting composition. This is because it adds texture into the piece. I also added a hole for a more 3D effect and also used string to connect the photos together  to make it seem like they're broken apart and only held on by a piece of string. I will use this in my final piece because it represents broken in a way I would like to use.

 Here I put together almost everything I have previously experimented on into one piece. I used 3 pieces of paper on top of one another with a hole in each to give a 3D effect with string connecting each side together. This I feel gives a broken effect. I also used more collage with black and white chalk to create contrast that put together, looks like one large clock. The cog in the middle represents the inside of the clock, as if the clock had a huge hole in it. I like this effect of creating an image with different parts like a jigsaw so I intend to use this in my final on perhaps a bigger scale.

Here I experimented with burning paper for a more free and old effect because coffee seems too controlled. I also added coffee using sponge for a less controlled effect. I feel like using burning and coffee in this way is effective with the black acrylic seeping into the coffee which makes an effect that cannot be created on purpose. I may use burning into my final piece, however I feel it will not fit with the effect I am trying to give in my final.

Here I decided to bring in wool as an experimental medium. I feel I can use this with thread for different line thicknesses with the 3D materials. While it isn't as easy to control, it adds a variety of mediums in the piece. The rough seeping acrylic lines resemble Guy Denning and the illusion of melting into the piece, while the coffee and pastel give a rusty effect and colour to the piece. I ripped the paper to give the broken and ripped effect as if it had been torn apart. I feel while it may not be visually appealing, it is a good effect to try to add more materials into my piece. I will use wool, however I believe I wont use pastel because it doesn't blend as well as it did.